Pokemon Unreal

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May 26th, 2017, 7:00 am
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migasand March 1st, 2017, 4:15 pm
Christine is (I am) sooo creative in naming Pokémon...
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WarWithin May 26th, 2017, 12:11 pm
This page looks blurry for some reason. Is this intentional?
migasand May 26th, 2017, 3:48 pm
@WarWithin: Yes. You might also notice it's less colorful. I'm trying to replicate a cold winter day. What do you think?
WarWithin May 26th, 2017, 4:31 pm
Definitely reads as a cold day for sure, just the blurriness is throwing me off a bit for some reason. I get where you are trying to go with it.
42Meep May 26th, 2017, 5:34 pm
Lazy names is fine. Just look at SSEC, with characters like Vay the vaporeon, and Bliz the Glacion
migasand May 28th, 2017, 2:43 pm
I'll try it without the blur, but that'll only happen later, as I've already written some pages ahead. I'm usually quite ahead of the published pages, so I can keep doing three weekly updates even when I can't write anything for some weeks - but that also means I can't correct or apply suggestions right away.

I just finished writing the full script for this chapter. I might be able to make it barely shorter than 150 pages. Let's see.